One spooky night. A witch came in and shrunk me!!!!!!!!!!!
I have to be careful of,
My chrome book
Getting Sat on
The Toilet
My School supplies
The Class pet
Raining pencils
Trays
Sandwiches
Water
Chair
Door getting locked
Food
I finally climbed up a desk
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, Splat!
Ooooooh ouch!
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT I LANDED ON A JELLY BEAN!
😡😡😡😡!
That hurt
Aaaaah the Class Parrot is chasing me!!!
Phew I think I lost that Parrot.
Uh Oh!
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH. The Parrot
The End
Koby,
ReplyDeleteGreat posting about our creative writing of being shrunk in the classroom. I especially like how you have used the listing tools to list your ideas of some barriers/challenges you might face after being shrunk. Your next step is to read over your work to ask if there is any more detail you could add to your sentences.
Miss Esselink
kia ora koby
ReplyDeleteit was funny when you landed on a jelly bean. Did it tasted yummy. what colour was the jelly bean. I like how you listed all the dangers. i like how you said the witch shrunk you.
From Joseph