Wednesday 11 November 2020

The Evil Magician Writing

 Once upon a time 


There was a magician doing magic tricks in a stadium in New Zealand. The magician's magic tricks were so bad that people threw trash at him.


Then the magician turned evil and he wanted to destroy the planet earth so he started destroying the planet Earth. Water flew up buildings broke.the good people thought that they would die. 


But then a superhero named super man came and saved the world and then they had a fight. Kicking bottoms, punching faces, evil magic, eye blasts, the fight took days to end. Then the super hero saved the world by blasting 10,000,000 eye blasts. People chaired then the superhero thought  that he might stay there and he did. It was the best decision he made.




           The End


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